Grooming Up/Vol 03 Chapter 028

Some Points to Clear Before We Can Release Revised Version

 * 1) Page 139 - Ume's speech on the last panel
 * 2) Page 140 - Ume's speech on the first panel
 * 3) Page 141 - Ume's speech in this page
 * 4) Page 146 - Conversation between Yuki & Hibiki
 * 5) Page 147 - Yuki's speech on bottom right panel
 * 6) Page 147 - Yuki's speech on last panel; especially to replace expose
 * 7) Page 148 - Yuki's speech on the 1st panel
 * 8) Page 148 - Shunpei's speech on the last panel

Revised Translation
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Previous Translation
Page 139 ume: what are you doing? shunpei: wa! shunpei: as you can see. hahaha ume: aa, quietly wiping that

Page 140 ume: i'm saved ume: there are lots of easy chores. just say if you want to do it shunpei: yes yes shunpei: putting these near pillow gave me a strange dream

Page 141 ume: what? shunpei: i'm returning these! ume: huh!? ume: don't need them any more? ume: did they help? shunpei: what the!? ume: not interested ume: then! wait a sec

Page 142 ume: this this ume: actually i have plenty shunpei: how many of these do you have...? hibiki: i'll go for a while

Page 143 shunpei: turning the other way for a while and this happens... shunpei: hey hey, children are not allowed to enter the grazing pasture!

Page 144 shunpei: ha? shunpei: o.... oh it's hibiki-san! shunpei: no way, i didn't expect you would cut your hair that much... yuki: who are you? yuki: your face is unfamiliar shunpei: e... shunpei: ee!? ume: a! hibiki: i'm home

Page 145 ume: a! hibiki-chan, big news! ume: manager must be informed! shunpei: th.. that...who's that, ume-san? shunpei: his face looks like hibiki-san shunpei: i thought hibiki-san cut her hair very short... hibiki: what did you say about my hair? shunpei: waa really short!! yuki: nothing has been changed here hibiki: yu... hibiki: yuu!? Page 146 yuki: it has been a year and a half, hasn't it? hibiki: why didn't you call first before you came home? yuki: sorry hibiki: not a single letter in a year and a half! hibiki: i don't know at all whether you are doing fine! yuki: what? are you worrying about daily issues like that? hibiki: not really hibiki: if anything happened to you, i'll surely know... umi: he is the oldest son, yūki umi: hibiki-chan's twin brother shunpei: twins! Page 147 yuki: ume-chan, umi: yes! yuki: who's that? yuki: new employee? umi: actually, bla bla bla yuki: a, ha yuki: yoo yuki: how is it free-loading at our place? yuki: my elder sisters are pretty good right? shunpei: a, yeah... shunpei: i would be lying if i deny that yuki: don't expose your [umakke], stupid shunpei: yes?

Page 148 yuki: i'm coming in to see father's face note: yūki uses 親父 (oyaji = old man) shunpei: uma... shunpei: umakke? shunpei: e, hibiki-san, shunpei: is my [umakke] exposed? hibiki: how could i know such thing!! shunpei: no.. that... shunpei: wait... ken: what is ummakke? ken: shunpei-kun, that is... ken: a male horse that gets an erection without regards of time and place shunpei: somehow a guy whom i just met for the first time can see my nature