Talk:Grooming Up/Vol 04 Chapter 036/@comment-24373936-20140831081147

Comparison between 1st draft and jzar's revision (1st vs 3rd)

Revision for page 87 (3rd vs 4th)

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(kunisaki): before it breaks down i'll be able to avenge makki

Somehow it doesn't sound right to me. i don't know, i can't exactly put a finger on anything in particular, but it sounds... strange?